2019年、鹽城一模英語(yǔ)作文詳解！本篇作文應(yīng)該怎么寫？

　　、鹽城一模英語(yǔ)試題已經(jīng)為學(xué)生們分享了，針對(duì)此次英語(yǔ)考試的作文部分，學(xué)生們感覺如何呢?應(yīng)該怎么寫呢?本文我們就細(xì)說、鹽城一模英語(yǔ)作文，幫助學(xué)生們分析作文題目!小編也會(huì)陸續(xù)為大家更新其他科目的考試試題及參考答案，請(qǐng)持續(xù)關(guān)注伊頓教育網(wǎng)站!

　　概括：

　　本文屬于現(xiàn)象——反應(yīng)類議論文，此類概括文分為兩個(gè)部分：現(xiàn)象是什么?反應(yīng)是什么?

　　現(xiàn)象：體育課很重要但被忽略(至于如何重要，如何被忽略，都不要寫了)

　　Sports classes are ignored though are very important.

　　進(jìn)一步濃縮：

　　Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools.

　　(Despite…, …這是通用的概括現(xiàn)象類句式)

　　反映：圖表的詞是：不滿(只能看主要的數(shù)據(jù)表現(xiàn)，這不是描述圖表，所以要反應(yīng)趨勢(shì))，政府是采取措施，不用說措施的主要內(nèi)容了。

　　More than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction with the sports classes. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it.

　　和上文合并濃縮：

　　Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (32個(gè)詞)

　　要點(diǎn)一：

　　原因可以從內(nèi)因和外因考慮：

　　1.應(yīng)試教育，所以學(xué)習(xí)壓力大 –》舉例：作業(yè)多(結(jié)果)犧牲體育課

　　2.體育設(shè)施不好

　　It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

　　要點(diǎn)二：

　　措施：這種公共性的現(xiàn)象一般都是從三個(gè)角度寫，我第一時(shí)間隨意寫了這些點(diǎn)，算是大腦風(fēng)暴吧，然后從中找邏輯關(guān)系，進(jìn)行取舍。

　　2. 政府：a factor for enrollment, encourage schools to put …in the first place

　　個(gè)人：strengthen their health, make the most of, build teamwork spirit

　　學(xué)校：instead of …, give high priority to, enough time should be allocated to…, facilities

　　總結(jié)：In fact, sports classes contribute to academic improvement, feel energetic and motivated

　　較終成文：

　　The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

　　Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose.

　　backfire (have opposite effect) «plan, scheme» 事與愿違

　　backfire on [somebody]　對(duì)某人產(chǎn)生適得其反的效果

　　完整的段落：

　　Despite sports classes’ importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (31個(gè)詞)

　　It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

　　The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

　　Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose. (125個(gè)詞)

　　詞塊：

　　in reponse作為反應(yīng)

　　exam-oriented system應(yīng)試制度

　　burden ... with...給……施加負(fù)擔(dān)

　　be to blame for...是……的原因

　　lost its appeal失去吸引力

　　invest in投入

　　give due attention to對(duì)……足夠的重視

　　embrace接受

　　be free of worries沒有擔(dān)憂

　　promote the awareness增強(qiáng)意識(shí)

　　backfire on sb對(duì)……不利

　　not...but rather...不是……而是相反，……

　　refreshsb使人精神抖擻

　　inspire one's passion激發(fā)熱情

　　serve one's purpose達(dá)到目的